Nov 12, 2023·edited Nov 12, 2023Liked by Orion Rhodes
Your story is really interesting. It tells about this person in a village who meets someone called the Collector. The way you describe the meeting is cool, like how the wind changes and the leaves fall. The simple language you use makes it easy to understand and enjoy. I like how you show that the Collector takes away pain, and the villagers believe in him. It makes the story mysterious and makes me want to know more about the Collector and the village!
Your story is really interesting. It tells about this person in a village who meets someone called the Collector. The way you describe the meeting is cool, like how the wind changes and the leaves fall. The simple language you use makes it easy to understand and enjoy. I like how you show that the Collector takes away pain, and the villagers believe in him. It makes the story mysterious and makes me want to know more about the Collector and the village!
Your descriptions are lovely and the concept of the Collector is really fun -- who doesn't love an elusive rando?
I loved it! It was beautifully written and made me want more! Can't wait for the next one.
So cool!